Miss Hines wanted us to make a explanation about a type of cycle or something like that so I did one on what is a eclipse.
What is a eclipse
By Olivia
The solar system is a very interesting place and sometimes objects from the solar System Will come down to earth,but that's for another time this time it's about an eclipse.
An Eclipse is when an object’s shadow goes onto a plane such as the sun then creates a Eclipse there are 2 main eclipses 1 is the solar eclipse the other is a lunar eclipse.
A solar eclipse is when the moon's shadow goes in front of the earth then creates the solar eclipse. A lunar eclipse is when The moon goes in the middle of the sun and moon you can see earth in the moon's shadow.
You may have seen an eclipse, maybe you haven't but this year you may be lucky because an eclipse will happen on November 30-December 1, 2020 and some others all year round.
Hi, Olivia.
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool thing to know about. I never knew that solar and lunar eclipses were different things. How you wrote everything was great but remember to write an before words that start with a vowel not a. Good job and keep up the great work.
From Giorgio
Hey Olivia, thanks for sharing your writing with us. Come and see me and I will show you how to format your blog post so we can read all of your writing. Keep up the great posting though!
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia, My name is Arielle, from T3.
ReplyDeleteAn eclipse sure does sound like a very interesting thing, I can't wait to see one.
I liked how you explain what it is and how it happens in a very clear way.
Next time check that your writing is on the blog page so it is easier to read.
Other than that I think you did an outstanding job writing this piece.
-Arielle