Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Kia ora Olivia, You have used rhyme effectively to describe our autumn season.It would enhance your presentation if each new idea started on a new line. I really like your use of colour, font and image to reflect the mood of autumn.
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Kia ora Olivia, You have used rhyme effectively to describe our autumn season.It would enhance your presentation if each new idea started on a new line. I really like your use of colour, font and image to reflect the mood of autumn.
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